My rating: 4.5/5
I'm rating this one high for uncommonly skilled writing and general hotness, but with a caveat. This story isn't for everyone. I think you really have to be into BDSM to enjoy this one. Some stories have a general appeal, with a bit of bondage or spanking to add a little spice. I'd say this one's more hard-core.
It's told from the man's point of view as he shows up at a dungeon to be dominated by a woman. He submits utterly, begs to be whipped, and of course puts on a cock ring. In addition to being a general turn-on, it's an interesting and authentic-feeling look at what might lead someone to willingly, even eagerly, do something that seems awfully degrading.
The story is quite short, but at $0.99 it's a total bargain. If female domination from a man's point of view does it for you, you won't do better than this. Malia Mallory is a writer to watch.
Buy it on Smashwords.
My rating: 4.5/5
Today's tasty tidbit is Private Party, or when I hired my best-friend stripper for my husband (Girls' Club). Poor Jack never got a stag party. His wife Mel, though, has a best friend who happens to be a stripper. She sets up a private stag party for her husband, and things quickly get out of hand in the best way possible.
It's a hot little story of two girls and one guy, and it's a sexy, enjoyable read. There's no particular development of characters or relationships. This one's all about the sex. It's very short, but it's priced accordingly, 99 cents at Amazon and free at Smashwords. It's also a good introduction to Polly Adams' "Girls Club" series.
Check it out at Smashwords.
My rating: 4/5
Oh my God, what a title.
This is a tasty, hot little story, not too long, about a receptionist with a very kinky annual Christmas tradition. It's a straightforward, fun little sex romp with a kind-of-sweet little mini-romance between Carol and one of her co-workers. All in all it's fun, entertaining, and hot.
The story jumps a lot from one person's head to another, and since it's a gangbang, there are a lot of people in the room. I lost track sometimes of who was whom. I would have preferred if the story had kept to one or two points of view, the main male character and maybe Carol, the receptionist.
Still, overall it's a very enjoyable read. Every corporate Christmas party should have something like this!
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I give it five stars out of five.
Hot stuff, and there is a bit of depth to it. The story is fairly short, and it gets to the point - the point being a tasty sex scene - fairly quickly, but there is also a pretty interesting set of character dynamics. You get to see a timid young woman reaching a point where she wonders if she can take the next step.
It's an interesting look at BDSM through the eyes of someone entering that world for the first time. Her reactions feel authentic. She's scared, uncertain, turned on, and a bit shocked at herself as she realizes what she's doing.
It works well as a stand-alone story, but I like the fact that Melody and her new lover have several more adventures ahead of them.
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